Carpe Diem Tan Renga Wednesday: Reverse Renga: Crystal Dewdrops


blue morning glory
closed against the rising sun
holding onto night
pink morning glory in full bloom
covered with crystal dewdrops  

~Cie & Chèvrefeuille~


Notes:
This time we were given the Ageku (two-line stanza) and had to compose the Hokku (three-line stanza). So, the three gloomy lines are mine. You know me. Or not, if you're lucky.

2 comments:

  1. I like a touch of realism with my poetry.

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    1. That's the thing I love about the Japanese poetry forms. They're so brief that there isn't much of a chance to get bogged down in minutia. Which, believe me, I am quite capable of doing. A Haiku/Senryu or Tanka forces me to get to the point.

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