Real Cie Reviews: Cynthia and Dan: Cyber War

Main positive takeaway: This book is a fast, fun, action-packed read.
Main negative takeaway: This book contains one of the most awkward sex scenes I've ever read.


  1. Professional editing (whether by a professional or not if that makes sense) is hugely important to me. Misplaced commas, clumsy sentence structure and/or spelling errors turn me off a book very quickly.

    1. There were a lot of misplaced commas in this book, and the chapter titles were rough, seeming more like headers for a first draft.
      Your comment about professional editing makes complete sense. A lot of people can't afford to pay for a high-cost editor, but they should, at the least, seek out the services of beta readers. I do beta reading, and would have mentioned the misplaced commas to the author of this book.


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