Carpe Diem #1760: Tan Renga: Butterfly

Butterfly on Honeysuckle

on the Honeysuckle
the fragile wings of a butterfly
a fluttering sound
it's become too cold for you
your children emerge in spring

~Chèvrefeuille & Cie~


Notes:
The Hokku stanza was created by Chèvrefeuille. The Ageku stanza was created by me.

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